MY STORY.
born and raised on the world of the zabrak alien race that supported the empire, even as a mere baby, Balkish was strong in the force and at the age of 7, he was discovered by the sith and they took him to Korriban to become sith. Balkish was only a child surrounded by other people who was force sensitive, who saw him as an easy prey, he grew quickly a strong hold of fear in his mind that was close to be the end of his life when he was sent out into one of the old sith tombs on the planet, to recover an old sith holocron where he was met by two other sith acolytes who hated aliens and wanted Balkish out of the way. Balkish suffered severe wounds upon his body and as he was laying on the ground bleeding to death, he heard the words that unlocked the hate that was laying hidden deep inside Balkish. The two acolytes had mocked him for being weak like any other alien, who thought that they had a chance to become sith. this angered Balkish but it wasnt until they told him they where going to visit his tribe on his home planet when they where done on Korriban, that Balkish lost it and jumped up from the ground and jumped over both the acolytes and grabbed his training saber and managed to cut the leg off, of one of the acolytes and the other he shot lightning at out of his finger tips without even knowing he was able to do that. The lightning paralyzed the other acolyte and Balkish jumped in and slashes his weapon across his face and made him blind. With both his enemies crippled he looked down at them and saw how weak they where, despite their claim to be masters of the force, he wanted to kill them but after the way they had mocked him, his tribe and the force, he decided to let the force decide if they where to survive. He grabbed the holocron he was sent to recover and then left the two acolytes alone deeply within the dark tomb. Balkish never saw them again but on his way out, he heard the sound of the crawling beast that lurked in the tomb and the screams of the two acolytes that echoed out through the old tomb. Since then Balkish was no longer the afraid and weeping child he had been, when he was taken away from his home. the emotion of hate had taken its place in his mind and created a deadly and cold sith, when he was fifteen he ended his sith training on Koriban by killing ten acolytes and two sith overseers with only his training sabers, he had been using two training sabers since he was ten since he felt one saber wasnt enough for him. He took the crystals of the overseers lightsabers and quickly after that found all the parts he needed to construct his two lightsabers. The slaughter of the many acolytes and two sith overseers quickly spread. Normally Balkish would have been trialed and executed for violating the rules of Koriban but he was released out into the galaxy under an order that came directly from the dark council. No sith lords wanted him as an apprentice but his rage could still be used as a unleashed weapon if allowed to be so. And so Balkish left Koriban in his new star ship and took out to explore the galaxy. A few decades later the watcher one and watcher two contacted Balkish informing him that the sith emperor had been watching him since he was a child and had now chosen him as his new wrath and so they bestowed the title the emperors wrath to Balkish meaning he served as the emperors right hand not even the dark council had authority to command him or could stop him from doing his missions only the emperor could command him.
APPEARANCE.
Skin color red with a little bit of orange but primary red.
Horns that goes all around his head
his black paint covering his body and face
about 1 meter and 95 centimeters tall.
age 29 (human years)
Sometimes he grows out his hair but not always.
(Balkish in his Sith battle armor leading other fellow Sith into battle)
Birthday:
December 8
Character Age
29 (in human years)
Character Gender
Male
Character Relationship Status
single
Character Appearance
Spiky horns around the head, red/orange Mixed skin color, yellow eyes war tribe face and body paint.
Character History/Story
Born and raised on the world of the zabrak alien race that supported the empire, even as a mere baby, Balkish was strong in the force and at the age of 4, he was discovered by the sith and they took him to Korriban to become sith. Balkish was only a child surrounded by other people who was force sensitive, who saw him as an easy prey, he grew quickly a strong hold of fear in his mind that was close to be the end of his life when he was sent out into one of the old sith tombs on the planet, to recover an old sith holocron where he was met by two other sith acolytes who hated aliens and wanted Balkish out of the way. Balkish suffered severe wounds upon his body and as he was laying on the ground bleeding to death, he heard the words that unlocked the hate that was laying hidden deep inside Balkish. The two acolytes had mocked him for being weak like any other alien, who thought that they had a chance to become sith. this angered Balkish but it wasnt until they told him they where going to visit his tribe on his home planet when they where done on Korriban, that Balkish lost it and jumped up from the ground and jumped over both the acolytes and grabbed his training saber and managed to cut the leg off, of one of the acolytes and the other he shot lightning at out of his finger tips without even knowing he was able to do that. The lightning paralyzed the other acolyte and Balkish jumped in and slashes his weapon across his face and made him blind. With both his enemies crippled he looked down at them and saw how weak they where, despite their claim to be masters of the force, he wanted to kill them but after the way they had mocked him, his tribe and the force, he decided to let the force decide if they where to survive. He grabbed the holocron he was sent to recover and then left the two acolytes alone deeply within the dark tomb. Balkish never saw them again but on his way out, he heard the sound of the crawling beast that lurked in the tomb and the screams of the two acolytes that echoed out through the old tomb. Since then Balkish was no longer the afraid and weeping child he had been, when he was taken away from his home. the emotion of hate had taken its place in his mind and created a deadly and cold sith, when he was fifteen he ended his sith training on Koriban by killing ten acolytes and two sith overseers with only his training sabers, he had been using two training sabers since he was ten since he felt one saber wasnt enough for him. He took the crystals of the overseers lightsabers and quickly after that found all the parts he needed to construct his two lightsabers. The slaughter of the many acolytes and two sith overseers quickly spread. Normally Balkish would have been trialed and executed for violating the rules of Koriban but he was released out into the galaxy under an order that came directly from the dark council. No sith lords wanted him as an apprentice but his rage could still be used as a unleashed weapon if allowed to be so. And so Balkish left Koriban in his new star ship and took out to explore the galaxy. A few decades later the watcher one and watcher two contacted Balkish informing him that the sith emperor had been watching him since he was a child and had now chosen him as his new wrath and so they bestowed the title the emperors wrath to Balkish meaning he served as the emperors right hand not even the dark council had authority to command him or could stop him from doing his missions only the emperor could command him.
Character Inventory
a star ship two lightsabers but he has collected several lightsabers that he has taken from fallen sith and jedi`s he has killed his dark sith robes with a hood that can hide him in dark places as well as hide his face. Balkish is trained in the most unpredictable and most aggressive form of lightsaber combat the Juyo also called vaapad and this form only became more aggressive and unpredictable because of Balkish's fondness of using two lightsabers at once, though when he is only using one lightsaber he would often use the soresu form which he uses as an element of surprise against his opponent especially when facing other Sith or Jedi, he often start the battle with just one lightsaber and is on the defense line as is the way of the soresu form and then hiding his other lightsaber, and then when they least expect it he would draw his second lightsaber with the force and start to unleash his fury and his rage with quick and devastating aggressive attacks, often surprising his fellow sith and especially jedi when faced with the fear and the rage he fought with and put into the minds of his enemies.
Character Abilites
extensive mastery of the force, master of lightsaber combat, and extremely strong physical body that also can endure allot
Writer's Writing Style (OOC)
No-Preference
Writer's Favored Genres (OOC)
Fantasy, Romance, Violence, Rated R, 18+, Action
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( Ok, great! That sounds like a really good idea. I'm cool with Alderran just because it's kind of underrated planet we don't get to see much of (at least not in the films). If you wouldn't mind starting us off that would be excellent! )
( Thank you for such a detailed response! I definitely see what you mean, I can see this working out really well! So Rey is a Jedi in training, but she's starting to question the Jedi code/way and is wondering why they have to follow such a strict way of being? So where do you think this RP could start? How could she meet your character? )
( Yeah, sure! We could try a plot from the old republic timeline. The only thing is that I'm not super familiar with that part of Star Wars, so I'm not quite sure where Rey could fit in. Do you have any possible suggestions for where she could be during that time? )
( Hello! And no worries :) I'd love to RP! Did you have any ideas in mind? )
(Hello there)
“Well there are one or two species that look human or can pass for one with little worry without the aid of shapeshifting like a Martian. Wow. That is a mouthful. Never been into long winded titles. I am merely Dark Supergirl or OverGirl. My villian name. My name name is Kara Zor-El II, of the house of El. The force? What is that? Some faux pseudo type of magic or something? On this world. It all about magic power, meta humans powers, and alien powers. Super powers basically, no force here. Is the force something related to your particular species or everyone has it where you come from? What all can it do? Is it limiting? Magic here has frenzy limits and there are all kinds of superpowers out there. Can your force help you lift and carry that clunker of yours? I could bench press that ship of your ship one handed. I’m my own tow truck service. “
She laughed a little at that and looked to the chick in the lab coat. She had quickly snatched her wallet and looked over her info.
” So know I know your names and address. You are going to set up a little bank account system for me and do wire transfer stuff from Cadmus. If not. I will hunt you down and make you my bitch. I’ll be in touch. Now get out of here.”
She would then release her hold she had on the scientist woman and left her run off while she turn back to her alien guest.
Lightning? Hmmmm. Hope this person is not another Livewire. She was getting a little tired of electroshock therapy. She would just watch his handiwork until there was barely anyone left to put up a fight. She kinda thought he should’ve toyed around with them more and not be so fast about the killing. She let out a small yawn and super speeded over to where he was dialing 1-800 Choke a bitch.
“You know. It’s not strageticly smart to kill off everyone. It would be prudent to keep one alive, a brainy type, for interrogation. Think about it. Aside from asking where the leader is. Shouldn’t you think about asking a few other things like. Ohhh. I dunno. What planet am I on? Who the world leaders are. What type of law enforcement and government system runs the place. What sort of military powers and strength do they have. What weapons of mass destruction and so forth should I be concern about. Is there a tow truck service to haul my broke ass ship to someplace I can hide it. Can I find someone to help me fix and repair my ship, find replacement parts, fuel, maybe communications array for ET phone home. Where can I get some food, a place to take a shit or a shower, place to rest. Are there people with Magic or superpowers on this world that can pose a serious problem or nuisance for me? You know. Shit like that, lightning red. You kill her. You are walking around blind. Not to mention are you going to walk into the city and leave your shop here for someone to find and strip mine? Or are you going to try to haul the thing to some abandon warehouse? These are the sort of things one might ask themselves when they land on some planet that is not their own and have no idea about. Also. Sometimes might want to ask what the year or century is. Just Incase you time traveled and didn’t know it. That also can be a big factor in things.
So you know. Food for thought. Course you can just kill her and hope you can befriend someone or make an ally that can give you the world tour and help you out. As fun as it was to watch you commit wholesale slaughter. Kinda did it too quickly don’t you think? More fun to make the death slow and painful then quick and painless but that’s just me. “
Her outfit.
Cadmus. She still was sore about Lillian Luthor escaping her grasp, thanks to the intervention of Supergirl. On one hand, she had to thank Mrs Luthor for her creation but on another hand, she wanted to kill her for her attempts to use her as her own personal weapon. She knew the hatred of aliens that Lillian and the rest of Cadmus had. She knew there were people on this planet that wanted to see all the non humans, dead and gone.
If she had a choice of a better planet to be on, she would be there but she didn’t. She had to make due with this little mudball since her home planet went boom, years ago. Currently she had been flying around the city inher new uniform. The uniform she stole from her evil Nazi counterpart from Earth X. The outfit and name of Supergirl X, was adopted by Dark Supergirl and she began to call herself, OverGirl, among a few other names she still went by. The only alteration she did to the costume was changing the SS thing so it wasn’t Nazi affiliated and was just one big Red Jagged S now, instead of the Two that was there before.
Little did she know she would soon be meeting someone that would come from an organization that one could think of as Nazi Like, in their practices and regime. At least, she certainly was going to think so about the Empire, at first, should she hear about them. The outfit fit like a glove and she even took the helmet headpiece cause why not. Made her disguise a little better using a helmet to cover her face and not doing the whole wig and sunglasses routine in her day to day. The sound of something crash landing in the desert outside of the city, had echoed and reached her, thanks to her superheart. Explosions, gunfire, shouting, screams, and so forth would soon follow the sound of the crash landing and that alone immediately peaked her interest.
What could be happening on the far outskirts of the city and in the desert, that would be the cause of screaming and sounds of a fire fight. She had nothing better to do today and screams of terror had always amused her. Whatever was going on out there, it sounded like it would be some amusing entertainment and she wasn’t going to pass up checking it out. Off she went like a sonic boom, picking up speed as she flew to the source of the disturbance and what she found was surprising.
Wait a sec. Were those Cadmus goons that she saw, fighting some..... what the hell. She looked closely at the figure who was cutting a swarm through the humans. She noticed one woman running away who looked like she was in charge. It wasn’t Lillian and wasn’t Amanda Waller either, but some stuck up , xenophobic bitch, was as good as another one and she flew down right into her path.
Her landing created a shockwave that knocked the scientist and anyone else close by, on their asses. So it was rapidly apparent that an alien vessel had crash landed here, and Cadmus being Cadmus, arrived in a timely manner before the earth’s military could, in order to no doubt harvest any technology and specimens that they could. She could guest that they must have pissed off the pilot or something with how things were going.
”Well. Color me shock. You Cadmus goons certainly got your alien radar detection force in full swing. I mean shit. I only just heard of the crash landing and then you guys apparently get here in record time. Seems you bit off more then you can chew and Waller and Luthor are not here. Pity. Whoever the red guy in the fancy black threads is with the laser swords, seems to be fucking up your shit. I am so glad I came just in time to see it. “
She smiled softly before she moved and grabbed the woman that was an that was on the ground and lifted her up. She would ask her where her bosses were located but when the woman replied with a Fuck You Alien scum, remark. Well then, Evil Kara simply snapped the bitches next and threw the body into one of the Cadmus goons that was running for his life.
“Stiiiiiiiiiiiirike!”
Now her attention was beginning to rest on the newcomer. Boy. This was going to be interesting.
(That would actually work. Since she wouldn’t pass up a chance to see what is causing havoc in the city or by it and couldn’t pass up finding out who or what was causing the screams of terror. So she would definitely come check it out and see what was going on.
Do you mind starting?)
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