MY STORY.
born and raised on the world of the zabrak alien race that supported the empire, even as a mere baby, Balkish was strong in the force and at the age of 7, he was discovered by the sith and they took him to Korriban to become sith. Balkish was only a child surrounded by other people who was force sensitive, who saw him as an easy prey, he grew quickly a strong hold of fear in his mind that was close to be the end of his life when he was sent out into one of the old sith tombs on the planet, to recover an old sith holocron where he was met by two other sith acolytes who hated aliens and wanted Balkish out of the way. Balkish suffered severe wounds upon his body and as he was laying on the ground bleeding to death, he heard the words that unlocked the hate that was laying hidden deep inside Balkish. The two acolytes had mocked him for being weak like any other alien, who thought that they had a chance to become sith. this angered Balkish but it wasnt until they told him they where going to visit his tribe on his home planet when they where done on Korriban, that Balkish lost it and jumped up from the ground and jumped over both the acolytes and grabbed his training saber and managed to cut the leg off, of one of the acolytes and the other he shot lightning at out of his finger tips without even knowing he was able to do that. The lightning paralyzed the other acolyte and Balkish jumped in and slashes his weapon across his face and made him blind. With both his enemies crippled he looked down at them and saw how weak they where, despite their claim to be masters of the force, he wanted to kill them but after the way they had mocked him, his tribe and the force, he decided to let the force decide if they where to survive. He grabbed the holocron he was sent to recover and then left the two acolytes alone deeply within the dark tomb. Balkish never saw them again but on his way out, he heard the sound of the crawling beast that lurked in the tomb and the screams of the two acolytes that echoed out through the old tomb. Since then Balkish was no longer the afraid and weeping child he had been, when he was taken away from his home. the emotion of hate had taken its place in his mind and created a deadly and cold sith, when he was fifteen he ended his sith training on Koriban by killing ten acolytes and two sith overseers with only his training sabers, he had been using two training sabers since he was ten since he felt one saber wasnt enough for him. He took the crystals of the overseers lightsabers and quickly after that found all the parts he needed to construct his two lightsabers. The slaughter of the many acolytes and two sith overseers quickly spread. Normally Balkish would have been trialed and executed for violating the rules of Koriban but he was released out into the galaxy under an order that came directly from the dark council. No sith lords wanted him as an apprentice but his rage could still be used as a unleashed weapon if allowed to be so. And so Balkish left Koriban in his new star ship and took out to explore the galaxy. A few decades later the watcher one and watcher two contacted Balkish informing him that the sith emperor had been watching him since he was a child and had now chosen him as his new wrath and so they bestowed the title the emperors wrath to Balkish meaning he served as the emperors right hand not even the dark council had authority to command him or could stop him from doing his missions only the emperor could command him.
APPEARANCE.
Skin color red with a little bit of orange but primary red.
Horns that goes all around his head
his black paint covering his body and face
about 1 meter and 95 centimeters tall.
age 29 (human years)
Sometimes he grows out his hair but not always.
(Balkish in his Sith battle armor leading other fellow Sith into battle)
Birthday:
December 8
Character Age
29 (in human years)
Character Gender
Male
Character Relationship Status
single
Character Appearance
Spiky horns around the head, red/orange Mixed skin color, yellow eyes war tribe face and body paint.
Character History/Story
Born and raised on the world of the zabrak alien race that supported the empire, even as a mere baby, Balkish was strong in the force and at the age of 4, he was discovered by the sith and they took him to Korriban to become sith. Balkish was only a child surrounded by other people who was force sensitive, who saw him as an easy prey, he grew quickly a strong hold of fear in his mind that was close to be the end of his life when he was sent out into one of the old sith tombs on the planet, to recover an old sith holocron where he was met by two other sith acolytes who hated aliens and wanted Balkish out of the way. Balkish suffered severe wounds upon his body and as he was laying on the ground bleeding to death, he heard the words that unlocked the hate that was laying hidden deep inside Balkish. The two acolytes had mocked him for being weak like any other alien, who thought that they had a chance to become sith. this angered Balkish but it wasnt until they told him they where going to visit his tribe on his home planet when they where done on Korriban, that Balkish lost it and jumped up from the ground and jumped over both the acolytes and grabbed his training saber and managed to cut the leg off, of one of the acolytes and the other he shot lightning at out of his finger tips without even knowing he was able to do that. The lightning paralyzed the other acolyte and Balkish jumped in and slashes his weapon across his face and made him blind. With both his enemies crippled he looked down at them and saw how weak they where, despite their claim to be masters of the force, he wanted to kill them but after the way they had mocked him, his tribe and the force, he decided to let the force decide if they where to survive. He grabbed the holocron he was sent to recover and then left the two acolytes alone deeply within the dark tomb. Balkish never saw them again but on his way out, he heard the sound of the crawling beast that lurked in the tomb and the screams of the two acolytes that echoed out through the old tomb. Since then Balkish was no longer the afraid and weeping child he had been, when he was taken away from his home. the emotion of hate had taken its place in his mind and created a deadly and cold sith, when he was fifteen he ended his sith training on Koriban by killing ten acolytes and two sith overseers with only his training sabers, he had been using two training sabers since he was ten since he felt one saber wasnt enough for him. He took the crystals of the overseers lightsabers and quickly after that found all the parts he needed to construct his two lightsabers. The slaughter of the many acolytes and two sith overseers quickly spread. Normally Balkish would have been trialed and executed for violating the rules of Koriban but he was released out into the galaxy under an order that came directly from the dark council. No sith lords wanted him as an apprentice but his rage could still be used as a unleashed weapon if allowed to be so. And so Balkish left Koriban in his new star ship and took out to explore the galaxy. A few decades later the watcher one and watcher two contacted Balkish informing him that the sith emperor had been watching him since he was a child and had now chosen him as his new wrath and so they bestowed the title the emperors wrath to Balkish meaning he served as the emperors right hand not even the dark council had authority to command him or could stop him from doing his missions only the emperor could command him.
Character Inventory
a star ship two lightsabers but he has collected several lightsabers that he has taken from fallen sith and jedi`s he has killed his dark sith robes with a hood that can hide him in dark places as well as hide his face. Balkish is trained in the most unpredictable and most aggressive form of lightsaber combat the Juyo also called vaapad and this form only became more aggressive and unpredictable because of Balkish's fondness of using two lightsabers at once, though when he is only using one lightsaber he would often use the soresu form which he uses as an element of surprise against his opponent especially when facing other Sith or Jedi, he often start the battle with just one lightsaber and is on the defense line as is the way of the soresu form and then hiding his other lightsaber, and then when they least expect it he would draw his second lightsaber with the force and start to unleash his fury and his rage with quick and devastating aggressive attacks, often surprising his fellow sith and especially jedi when faced with the fear and the rage he fought with and put into the minds of his enemies.
Character Abilites
extensive mastery of the force, master of lightsaber combat, and extremely strong physical body that also can endure allot
Writer's Writing Style (OOC)
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Writer's Favored Genres (OOC)
Fantasy, Romance, Violence, Rated R, 18+, Action
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While Balkish was away, Rey took the time to examine the ship more thoroughly and see what made it tick. The technology was quite advanced and unlike anything she had ever seen. Her anxiety was starting to diminish as she began to realize what she was really doing. She was so excited to finally see her parents after all these years. Perhaps they could even be a true family again, and stay together for the rest of their lives.
These possibilities and more came to Rey's mind as she carefully opened up a control panel to examine the wires within.
Rey kept close to Balkish as they passed by many strangers from many places. She was especially weary of the Sith, and could feel their dark power as she turned her head away from them. When they finally reached the ship, Rey's fear almost instantly disappeared as she became fascinated.
"Amazing! I've never seen anything like this before," she said as she began walking around, both inside and outside the ship, as if trying to look at every angle. Machines and technology had always interested her, and she was always eager to learn more about them. The only ship she had ever been on was the one her parents had flown, and it was so long ago that Rey barely remembered what it looked like.
"Where did you get it?" She asked curiously as she looked at the controls in the cockpit.
Although she tried her best to understand everything he was saying, Rey couldn't comprehend all of it, and he was using certain words and referring to other places she did not know about either. But she hoped that in time she would understand everything there was to know about the force. The good, the bad and everything inbetween. She hoped that Balkish was the key to all of that, and she hoped that he was, or else she had just made a big mistake.
"I see....I don't really know what I want to do yet, I need some time to think about it," Rey answered as her gaze dropped to the ground, her mind concentrated in deep thought. It was a good thing that his intentions were not more devious. If he was able to find Rey so easily, then perhaps darker beings could as well. In which case, he would make a suitable bodyguard for her, as he had shown his skill in combat.
As she listened, the young woman began to realize just how much effort Balkish had put into finding and locating her. This was a process that could not have been done in a day, not even a week. Furthermore, she never knew how strong her abilities are, or at least, she was never told that. When he was finished explaining, she didn't really have any questions, except one.
"Hm, that seems like a lot of effort just to find one student. If you're not going to recruit me, then why go to all that trouble?" She asked, becoming a bit braver with her questioning.
Rey's face hardened with a renewed sense of independence as she reached out and accepted the light saber. She took a moment to ignite it and admire her new weapon before extinguishing it and clipping it to her belt. "Thank you," she said quietly before following Balkish back out of the woods.
She couldn't help but feel slightly guilty as she walked behind him. A part of her was saddened that her Jedi traning had come to such an abrupt end and that she was abandoning her teachers and peers. On the other hand, she was thankful to have been given this opportunity to not only see her parents, but to shape her fate in a way that she could not before. This strange mix of feelings bubbled inside her as they exited the forest. The night was calm and cool.
"Balkish?" Rey asked softly, as if afraid to ask any questions. "How do you know my parents?"
( Hi there, no worries at all! Enjoy your trip :) )
As her tears came to a stop, Rey furrowed her brow as she thought hard about what Balkish was offering. A chance, a chance to change her fate. An opportunity to learn everything about the force, the good and the bad. Or maybe there was no such thing.
She finally made a decision. She figured that if things went bad, or she longed to return to the Jedi teachings, then perhaps that option would always exist. If she didn't go, then she would be forced onto one path, and forever wonder if she could have done anything different. Despite Balkish's dark ways and his demonic figure, Rey could sense the truth in his words. Beyond that, she had a strong feeling that he was telling the truth.
Wearing a look of determination, Rey reached out and took his hand firmly; her choice was made. "Let's go," was all she said.
Sniffing and raising a hand to wipe her eyes, Rey looked up at Balkish with tear-stained cheeks. "Haven't you done enough? Everything was fine until you came along!" She cried before standing up and taking a few steps in the opposite direction.
No, that wasn't exactly true. She had already begun questioning her masters long before Balkish ever arrived. She had always sensed that something was off, but until now she could never put it into words. She wasn't angry at the Sith, not really. She was angry with the truth, and the deception that had been brought upon her.
The Jedi were Rey's heroes, she had idolized them from a young age. Of course, they couldn't all be deceivers, she knew that for certain. But she hated the idea that she could not trust her master's anymore. Could she even trust another Jedi after learning what she had today?
"I'm sorry, I just..." Rey sighed and wiped her eyes once more before turning to face him. "This is so much to take in. I don't know what to do," she said with a sigh. "I do want to see my parents, I really do. But...will they approve of my choices?" She asked, hoping that Balkish could give her the answer.
When Rey finally stopped running, she felt as though her lungs were going to give out. Stumbling backwards and sitting down on a fallen log, she breathed heavily and looked around the darkened trees. There was hardly any light, except for the glow of two moons that crept its way to the forest floor.
Rey suddenly remembered what she had in her hand and looked at the holocommunicator. Now that she was alone, and without pressure, she could finally click the button and establish contact with her parents. She hadn't seen them in so long, all she wanted to do was see their faces, and hopefully let them know she was alright, and vice versa. Rey stared at the device for a long time, but she never turned it on.
Finally allowing her tears to release, Rey sobbed and allowed the holocommunicator to fall from her grasp and onto the ground. She couldn't do it. She didn't want to see them under these circumstances. What was she supposed to tell them? That she had fled from a fight and believed the words of a Sith in order to talk to them? They would have been dissapointed in her, just as she was dissapointed in herself for allowing emotion to succeed. 'What kind of Jedi am I...' she thought to herself.
The rest of the Jedi could remain docile no longer. Eager to avenge their fallen friend, they all ignited their sabers and rushed in to attack Balkish.
"Rey! Go! Find somewhere safe!" Master Kadarn called out before he swung his weapon at Balkish. Although their numbers were greater, they struggled to fight against the Wrath. Rey would have assisted them, but she had no saber to use and she feared that her strength in the force was not powerful enough to make a difference in this fight. Instead she pondered over the words of her master.
'Somewhere safe?' She thought, after everything that had just been revealed to her? How could she possibly trust these people now? Perhaps their intentions were just at one point, but now, Rey wasn't so sure. Feeling lost, confused and helpless, Rey did obey her Master, but she did not go in the direction he might have expected.
Instead, she took off and ran into the forest that stood tall next to the padawan huts. Still clutching the holocommunicator tight in her hand, she didn't care that the trees were dark and she was all alone. She just wanted to get away from everything. She was experiencing too much confusion to do anything else. She ran and ran until the sounds of yells and light sabers sounded worlds away.
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