Name: Grievous

Rank: Supreme Commander of the Separatist Droid Army but prefers to still to go by General

Spiecies: Former Kaleesh but now a cybernetic warrior to destroy the Jedi and the Republic

Age: Unknown




A Long  time ago in a Galaxy far, far away

A Kaleesh Warlord  and feared warrior from the Planet Kalee, Grievous learned battle tactics and warfare during Kalee's war against the Yam'rii  of Huk. Grievous also developed a personal vendetta against the Galactic Republic during this conflict because of the government's support to the Yam'rii. At some point in his  life, Grievous became a cyborg following a serious accident that destroyed most of his body and almost killed him, but afterwards he chose to receive extreme cybernetic upgrades to increase his skills in combat and to become even more threatening While the transformation left Grievous to be more cybernetic than living Kaleesh flesh, Grievous saw his cyborg implants as improvements.

While Grievous claimed his old form was no more than weak flesh, Grievous had several reminders of his past life. As a cyborg, Grievous wore a Kaleesh cloak, which was a vestige of his past identity, and the type of fearsome mask that was often worn by Kaleesh warriors. By the time he owned his fortress on Vassek, Grievous had several statues that showed a progression from his organic life to that of a cyborg. After Grievous's reconstruction, all that remained of his original body were his brain, eyes, several vital organs,spinal cord, and a small amount of red Kaleesh flesh could still be seen around his eyes. Grievous's armor and synthskin gut-sack protected his remaining vital organs, but his organic lungs were irritated by their implants. This gave Grievous a persistent cough for the rest of his life.


After Grievous received his cybernetic enhancements and trained in lightsaber combat by Count Dooku, he gained the rank of General in the Confederacy military. Serving as the Supreme Commander of the Droid Army,his forces engaged the Grand Army of the Republic in the Clone Wars, and, under his command, the Separatist Droid Army moved throughout the galaxy. Early into the war, around the time of the Battle of Christophsis, Grievous had already spread Republic forces thin. While the war against the Yam'rii had given Grievous a vendetta against the Republic, Grievous had changed by the Clone Wars. Grievous now was indifferent to the Republic, and his main goal was to see the extermination of the Jedi Order. Grievous fought against numerous Jedi during the war, and he and defeated and killed many. Grievous was proved him to be a feared Jedi Hunter. The General collected lightsabers and other trophies from the Jedi he killed and kept them in his growing collection.


As the Separatist Army's leader, Grievous caused fear throughout the Republic, and as a number of galactic citizens saw Dooku as noble yet misguided, many saw Grievous as the true face of the Confederacy. Jedi Anakin Skywalker considered him a monster that needed to be stopped, but Skywalker and Grievous would not meet face-to-face until the war had nearly reached its conclusion. However, Grievous did encounter the Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi, and the two fought each other numerous times throughout the war.


Ultimately, the Republic held all the momentum for the third year of the war. The Separatists were pushed to the Outer Rim Territories, and, in the campaign known as the Out Rim Sieges, the forces of the Republic kept up the pressure. A surrender from the Separatists seemed as though it would come in due time, but, with the Republic Military occupied in the galaxy's spiral arms, the capital of Coruscant was left with fewer defenses. Republic strategists were not worried, but Sidious arranged for Grievous to launch a massive assault to capture Sidous's alter ego, Supreme Chancellor Sheev Palpatine. The Coruscant Home Defense Fleet was caught off guard, and, with the chaos and Confederacy Navy providing cover, Grievous and a strike team could land on Coruscant's surface. Grievous landed in the Exective District  and fought his way through layers of security forces and Jedi to secure Palpatine, killing Jedi Roron Corobb and knocking out Master Shaak Ti with electrified cables and stealing her lightsaber in the process.

Grievous then took the Chancellor aboard his flagship the Invisible Hand. Jedi Knights Anakin Skywalker and Obi-Wan Kenobi boarded the Invisible Hand to rescue the Chancellor. They first defeated Count Dooku and were escaping with the Chancellor when Grievous captured them, meeting with Skywalker face to face for the first time. The Jedi broke free of their bonds, and after destroying IG-101 and IG-102, the pair cornered Grievous. Too wounded to fight, the General had to shatter the front window of the cruiser with an electrostaff. Kenobi, Skywalker and the Chancellor managed to stay in the ship, but Grievous was sucked into space. Protected from exposure to vacuum, the general survived and used a grappling hook installed in his arm to latch onto the hull of the ship.

After ejecting the rest to trap the Jedi and the Chancellor inside, Grievous fled in one of his dying flagship's escape pods, and later headed for the secured planet of Utapau in the Outer Rim Territories, where the Separatist Council was hiding. With Count Dooku's death, Grievous succeeded him as Head of State of the Confederacy of Independent Systems. Under the direct order of Dooku's Master, Darth Sidious, Grievous was to relocate the Council to the planet Mustafar.


After the Republic received word that Grievous was hiding on Utapau, General Kenobi was sent to defeat him. Kenobi watched as Grievous spoke to the Separatist Council, and though Nute Gunray doubted Grievous's ability to keep them safe, they followed his orders and left just moments before Kenobi would jump down to Grievous.

Kenobi jumped down from a bar above and greeted Grievous, who applauded his audacity before ordering his bodyguards to kill the Jedi Master. After Kenobi handily defeated Grievous' bodyguards, the droid army prepared to open fire. However, Grievous ordered them to back away as he decided to engage Kenobi himself. He immediately split his arms in four and attacked the Jedi Master in one last duel. But the injuries to his left side had not yet been treated and, as a consequence to either his negligence or a lack of spare parts, he was apparently unable to fight as well as he used to. Grievous lost two of his hands to Kenobi before Clone Commander "Cody" and the 212th Attack Battalion arrived, ambushing the droid army. Fighting broke out all over Pau City between droid and clone forces. Grievous continued to threaten Kenobi, but Kenobi ended the initial duel with a tremendous Force push that disarmed the general. Grievous fled on his wheel bike.


Pursued by Kenobi on a varactyl named Boga, after a prolonged chase and running duel, the two soon crashed onto Grievous' private landing platform, where the Soulless One was docked. As they fought hand-to-hand, Grievous made use of his mechanical body's superior strength. However, Kenobi managed to rip open Grievous' chest plates, revealing Grievous' gut-sack. Angered, Grievous tossed Kenobi off the platform, but the Jedi manipulated his position via Force and caught hold of the edge. Grievous charged Kenobi with an electrostaff, preparing to finish off his old adversary. However, Kenobi used the Force to summon Grievous' blaster, shooting Grievous five times in his exposed gut-sack. The oils preserving Grievous' remaining biological components ignited, incinerating the famed cyborg from the inside and finally destroying him.


After his death The Empire rose into power, strong and killed most of the Jedi. They took General Grivous's body and researched it they could replace their emperors right hand only for it to blow in their faces. So The Emperor locked away the remains of Grievous so that it could be used again by scientists for the project known as NK. But their project was cut short when one of the scientists stole Grievous and took him in order to make Grievous  home planet he was still alive and make an army to take over the Galaxy. But in the end Grievous's body was broken apart by bounty hunters who would sell his parts.


Everything that happened led to one Grand Admiral taking the mask of Grievous in a collection of ancient artifacts and war trinkets.   But something stirred, a dark aura could be seen in the eye sockets as if life was still in them. Years had past and the Empire was no more;  What remained of the Empire took the mask of Grievous and decided one more project must be done if the Empire were to survive. They put Grievous back together, but with more stronger parts, a better yet slicker armor that would be resistant to blunt objects like pure steel hammers and hard metal that lightsabers could not penetrate his armored body. They took him to a asteroid field  filled with the Darkside of the force. They shot him into space with the intent of collecting enough energy from the darkside to make an army of Sith warriors.


But when Grievous absorbed most of the darkside, something stirred inside of him. All the memories from the past, the battles, the all came back to him. Soon enough he started to feel agony for the first time as the one thing that was keeping the former dead General from feeling anything was the inhibitar of that in his brain. A great push led to him flying toward the ship of scientists breaking through the hanger bay slaughtering those inside.  Now conufused and floating in the echos of space all he could do was contemplate his next move; that was simple...revenge on this new galaxy, and repair the Droid way or another. 


The first he did was enter Coruscant where he slipped into the the lines of the fallen Empire and straight to the Emperor's chambers. He stole the two lightsabers that belonged to Darth Sidious, then went to  his statue only to tear it down revealing yet another; three light sabers were now part of his collection, and a fourth was closer then he thought As he went to one of Sidius's treasure rooms finding Count Dooku's, Darth Plagus  and Darth Bane's lightsabers intact.  He would question how he got them but decided against it as he would make his leave killing a few guards on the way while taking the droids that were in the treasure room as his own.   Now the only thing he needed was transportation with a hyperdrive. With his magna droid Grievous managed to cut down what remained of the stormtroopers  that were guarding the shipyard. Taking  a private ship they left the planet only to head straight to Mustafar.


There he learned that things were more complicated as things were.   The planet was more of a castle domain and reeked of death, and not to mention the late Sith Lord. His data banks recollected about Darth Vader, he knew who he was and what he has became.  But at the time that didn't matter to Grievous, all that mattered was preparing for the new age.  He restarted production of the battle droids and hired  engineers to make shipd to carry all the droids and including the making of a few Lucrehulks to operate them. When the First Order and the Resistance began to fight  General Grievous had already had his own dreadnoutght; he calls it the Harbinger, with it he uses the ship to hyper speed to any planet he desired. 



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Droid like, four arms two are hidden from plain sight. I Wears a metal plated mask with golden eyes revealed for everyone to see.

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Always angry, always bitter to his enemies.

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The destruction of the Jedi, and the victory of the Droid army

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Jedi, droids that are foolish.

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Fantasy, Romance, Violence, Anime, Rated R, 18+, Gore, Action

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  • In the midst of the fight, Rey was able to notice the Resistance scout as he came closer and she thought it odd but not unexpected that he was wearing the helm. "Right," was all she said in response, knowing that to leave now while they had the chance would be the smartest choice.

    "Come on! Run!" She called out to the other rebels and they all ran out of the fortress together. It almost felt like a defeat, like failure, but Rey was not nearly done with General Grevious yet. No doubt this new enemy would make himself known to her again. But where? And how? She couldn't say. But she had not forgotten the words of the helm, and was glad to know that the promise she had made was honoured. The item had come with them after all, and would now be leaving the fortress and the planet itself.

    Sinking into one of the chairs, Rey sighed and only now realized just how tired she was. She examined her body and saw that she had a few cuts and scrapes, but nothing major. She looked around and saw the faces of her rebel friends. She gave a weary smile to them, knowing that at least she had saved as many as she could.

    She then would go to address the scout that had been wearing the helm. "Did you hear the voice too?" she asked.

  • As Rey heard Grevious laugh at her, a cold and empty feeling suddenly ran through her body. He was taunting her, yes, but something about the way he did it made her feel like she was wrong to hold onto hope. Even so, she continued to grip her lightsaber tightly and stare at him with strength.

    When it seemed that he was about to leave her, Rey sought to follow him. She still had so many questions; questions that he held the answers to. "Wait! Stop!" she called out, moving forward until the Magnadroids suddenly cut her off. Rey gasped but maintained her composure as she began to fight them off. Soon Grevious was out of her mind, but she had not forgotten the words he spoke to her.

    Until she was a true Jedi...when would that be? Who was left to properly teach her? These questions and many like them plagued her mind but she found the will to push them aside. After downing the two of the droids she turned and acknowledged the other Rebels. As she quickly glanced at her allies, she did notice one of them wearing helmet she had seen earlier. Was it really the same one?


  • (Could you start please? Maybe he could find her since shes Force Sensitive and already having an connection of the Dark Side?)

  • While Grevious spoke, Rey continued to look up at him with caution and confusion. She understood very little of what he was trying to tell her, but she did recognize a few words. She knew who General Kenobi was, or rather, who he had been. It seemed that there were more Jedi survivors than Rey and many others were aware of. But if this was the case, where were they now? Why would they not join the Resistance?

    Rey held these questions and many more in her mind, but she wondered if the answers would be forever out of reach. It seemed that Grevious was not exactly looking for a conversation, and she anticipated that he was about to attack her. Taking a firm stance, she waited until the last possible moment to evade his attack, and as she stepped to the side she also swung her lightsaber at his body, hoping to land a strike.

    Taking a couple steps back, Rey found herself becoming a bit weary. She wouldn't give up, but she wondered if staying and fighting this enemy was doing more harm than good. Perhaps she couldn't defeat him, not on her own, and it would be best to retreat and regroup in order to increase the odds.

    "I don't know where you come from, or who the Valkarin are, but I know this," Rey said in between heavy breaths as she held her lightsaber up. "The Resistance is far from finished, and I will do everything I can to protect the Jedi Order and the light. If you wish to test our resolve, so be it, but you will only have yourself to blame when you fail," she said, perhaps unknowingly echoing the ways of the old Jedi and how they spoke to their enemies.  

  • (I like that! I like that idea an lot)

  • As fast as she tried to be, Rey was not a perfect fighter no matter how in tune to the force she was. She had left herself open to being hit in the thigh and winced before swinging at him one more time before they both backed away from each other.

    Taking a moment to regain her stamina, Rey breathed hard as she looked up at this foe who began to speak. She recognized who he was talking about, but the way he spoke almost seemed like he wanted her to succeed, even though she quite doubted this. But something he said deeply puzzled her. "One of few?" Rey repeated softly before he threw the staff. This time she was ready for it and managed to step to the side before catching the staff with her other hand. If she needed to, she would use his own weapon against him but she wanted to know a few things first.

    "Why do you say one of few? Are you saying there are more Jedi who survived the purge?" she said, stepping to the side slightly to see him better. As far as she knew, Rey was the last Jedi after Luke had become one with the force. "What is it that you want?" she added afterwards, wondering what side Grevious was on and what his main objective would be.


  • (She would be able or try her hardest..)

  • As Rey continued to fight, she quickly realized that she was dealing with a very experienced warrior. She couldn't tell for sure how old he was, but she felt his experience in every swing and attack he sent her way. She barely managed to keep up with his attacks as it was, and was caught off guard just long enough to be grabbed and thrown aside.

    Rey let out a painful gasp as she felt her back collide with the wall, as well as the claw marks he had left on her neck, which she briefly felt with her free hand as she looked at him. His words infuriated her, but she remembered that this was what he wanted. He was trying to provoke her in an attempt for her to use her anger as a weapon. Unfortunately for Grevious, Rey was making this difficult to achieve.

    "You don't know me, I have nothing to prove to you!" She said strongly before rushing in again to continue fighting him. Her swings became faster and more purposeful as she tried to aim at his limbs, hoping to sever at least one of them. She didn't need rage to defeat him, only strength and determination.

  • (Oh... So maybe they can't be allies or he can't train her?? Do you have anything in mind?)

  • Rey continued to stare him down with seething anger, but she was not so enraged that she had forgotten all sense of intellect.

    3440340694?profile=RESIZE_180x180She had absolutely no idea who this 'person' was, nor what their true intentions were, so she knew that she had to be careful. Yes, she was a Jedi, but probably not in the way that he was thinking. She saw no reason to reveal exactly who she was, so she didn't.

    At the very least, she refused to give him what he wanted. Yes, she was angry, but she would not draw her power from it. That was not her way, it was the way of the dark side. Rey could feel that this creature, this robotic entity, was close to the dark side, but was he a Sith? She could only wonder as she prepared herself to fight.

    Watching as he gripped his new weapon, Rey tensed up and raised her lightsaber to block his attack. She marvelled at his strength while summoning her own, and managed to push him back before taking a few swings at him. She didn't care if she defeated him or not, she just needed to keep him busy until her friends could make it out of the fortress safely.



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