MY STORY.

born and raised on the world of the zabrak alien race that supported the empire, even as a mere baby, Balkish was strong in the force and at the age of 7, he was discovered by the sith and they took him to Korriban to become sith. Balkish was only a child surrounded by other people who was force sensitive, who saw him as an easy prey, he grew quickly a strong hold of fear in his mind that was close to be the end of his life when he was sent out into one of the old sith tombs on the planet, to recover an old sith holocron where he was met by two other sith acolytes who hated aliens and wanted Balkish out of the way. Balkish suffered severe wounds upon his body and as he was laying on the ground bleeding to death, he heard the words that unlocked the hate that was laying hidden deep inside Balkish. The two acolytes had mocked him for being weak like any other alien, who thought that they had a chance to become sith. this angered Balkish but it wasnt until they told him they where going to visit his tribe on his home planet when they where done on Korriban, that Balkish lost it and jumped up from the ground and jumped over both the acolytes and grabbed his training saber and managed to cut the leg off, of one of the acolytes and the other he shot lightning at out of his finger tips without even knowing he was able to do that. The lightning paralyzed the other acolyte and Balkish jumped in and slashes his weapon across his face and made him blind. With both his enemies crippled he looked down at them and saw how weak they where, despite their claim to be masters of the force, he wanted to kill them but after the way they had mocked him, his tribe and the force, he decided to let the force decide if they where to survive. He grabbed the holocron he was sent to recover and then left the two acolytes alone deeply within the dark tomb. Balkish never saw them again but on his way out, he heard the sound of the crawling beast that lurked in the tomb and the screams of the two acolytes that echoed out through the old tomb. Since then Balkish was no longer the afraid and weeping child he had been, when he was taken away from his home. the emotion of hate had taken its place in his mind and created a deadly and cold sith, when he was fifteen he ended his sith training on Koriban by killing ten acolytes and two sith overseers with only his training sabers, he had been using two training sabers since he was ten since he felt one saber wasnt enough for him. He took the crystals of the overseers lightsabers and quickly after that found all the parts he needed to construct his two lightsabers. The slaughter of the many acolytes and two sith overseers quickly spread. Normally Balkish would have been trialed and executed for violating the rules of Koriban but he was released out into the galaxy under an order that came directly from the dark council. No sith lords wanted him as an apprentice but his rage could still be used as a unleashed weapon if allowed to be so. And so Balkish left Koriban in his new star ship and took out to explore the galaxy. A few decades later the watcher one and watcher two contacted Balkish informing him that the sith emperor had been watching him since he was a child and had now chosen him as his new wrath and so they bestowed the title the emperors wrath to Balkish meaning he served as the emperors right hand not even the dark council had authority to command him or could stop him from doing his missions only the emperor could command him.

APPEARANCE.

Skin color red with a little bit of orange but primary red.
Horns that goes all around his head
his black  paint covering his body and face
about 1 meter and 95 centimeters tall.
age 29 (human years)
Sometimes he grows out his hair but not always.

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Character Age

29 (in human years)


Character Species

Other


Character Gender

Male


Character Relationship Status

single


Character Appearance

Spiky horns around the head, red/orange Mixed skin color, yellow eyes war tribe face and body paint.


Character History/Story

Born and raised on the world of the zabrak alien race that supported the empire, even as a mere baby, Balkish was strong in the force and at the age of 4, he was discovered by the sith and they took him to Korriban to become sith. Balkish was only a child surrounded by other people who was force sensitive, who saw him as an easy prey, he grew quickly a strong hold of fear in his mind that was close to be the end of his life when he was sent out into one of the old sith tombs on the planet, to recover an old sith holocron where he was met by two other sith acolytes who hated aliens and wanted Balkish out of the way. Balkish suffered severe wounds upon his body and as he was laying on the ground bleeding to death, he heard the words that unlocked the hate that was laying hidden deep inside Balkish. The two acolytes had mocked him for being weak like any other alien, who thought that they had a chance to become sith. this angered Balkish but it wasnt until they told him they where going to visit his tribe on his home planet when they where done on Korriban, that Balkish lost it and jumped up from the ground and jumped over both the acolytes and grabbed his training saber and managed to cut the leg off, of one of the acolytes and the other he shot lightning at out of his finger tips without even knowing he was able to do that. The lightning paralyzed the other acolyte and Balkish jumped in and slashes his weapon across his face and made him blind. With both his enemies crippled he looked down at them and saw how weak they where, despite their claim to be masters of the force, he wanted to kill them but after the way they had mocked him, his tribe and the force, he decided to let the force decide if they where to survive. He grabbed the holocron he was sent to recover and then left the two acolytes alone deeply within the dark tomb. Balkish never saw them again but on his way out, he heard the sound of the crawling beast that lurked in the tomb and the screams of the two acolytes that echoed out through the old tomb. Since then Balkish was no longer the afraid and weeping child he had been, when he was taken away from his home. the emotion of hate had taken its place in his mind and created a deadly and cold sith, when he was fifteen he ended his sith training on Koriban by killing ten acolytes and two sith overseers with only his training sabers, he had been using two training sabers since he was ten since he felt one saber wasnt enough for him. He took the crystals of the overseers lightsabers and quickly after that found all the parts he needed to construct his two lightsabers. The slaughter of the many acolytes and two sith overseers quickly spread. Normally Balkish would have been trialed and executed for violating the rules of Koriban but he was released out into the galaxy under an order that came directly from the dark council. No sith lords wanted him as an apprentice but his rage could still be used as a unleashed weapon if allowed to be so. And so Balkish left Koriban in his new star ship and took out to explore the galaxy. A few decades later the watcher one and watcher two contacted Balkish informing him that the sith emperor had been watching him since he was a child and had now chosen him as his new wrath and so they bestowed the title the emperors wrath to Balkish meaning he served as the emperors right hand not even the dark council had authority to command him or could stop him from doing his missions only the emperor could command him.


Character Inventory

a star ship two lightsabers but he has collected several lightsabers that he has taken from fallen sith and jedi`s he has killed his dark sith robes with a hood that can hide him in dark places as well as hide his face. Balkish is trained in the most unpredictable and most aggressive form of lightsaber combat the Juyo also called vaapad and this form only became more aggressive and unpredictable because of Balkish's fondness of using two lightsabers at once, though when he is only using one lightsaber he would often use the soresu form which he uses as an element of surprise against his opponent especially when facing other Sith or Jedi, he often start the battle with just one lightsaber and is on the defense line as is the way of the soresu form and then hiding his other lightsaber, and then when they least expect it he would draw his second lightsaber with the force and start to unleash his fury and his rage with quick and devastating aggressive attacks, often surprising his fellow sith and especially jedi when faced with the fear and the rage he fought with and put into the minds of his enemies.


Character Abilites

extensive mastery of the force, master of lightsaber combat, and extremely strong physical body that also can endure allot


Writer's Writing Style (OOC)

No-Preference


Writer's Favored Genres (OOC)

Fantasy, Violence, Rated R, 18+, Action, Adult


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  • Rey found a chair to sit in as she listened closely to what Balkish had to say. Rey was curious about this tribe, it seemed very different compared to some of the other cultures she had been exposed to. At the mentioning of his parents, it made Rey feel a twinge of sadness upon remembering that she probably wouldn't be seeing her parents again for a while; but at least she knew they were alright.

    "Have you ever thought about trying to find your parents? To see if they're still alive?" Rey asked curiously, as this did not seem to be a priority for Balkish, and she wondered how it couldn't be.

  • As Balkish spoke to her, Rey put a knuckle to her chin as she thought about what else she wanted to ask. She did have another question in mind, but she worried it was not appropriate, especially considering she and Balkish hadn't known each other for that long. But perhaps it was worth a try.

    "I'm curious, Master..." she began, stepping a bit closer to him. "And forgive me if I shouldn't be asking this, but...I find myself wondering where you come from? Your background, your history...your family...I'd like to know more about the man who will be training me in the ways of the force," she said with a slight smile before adding another statement.

    "But...only if you wish to tell me..." she commented before glancing away, as though embarassed.

  • [ No worries, friend! Thanks for letting me know ]

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    I do like the sound of that. Fair warning, Lilith has a tendency of losing interest. So it would be in his best interest to keep it, interesting.

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  • As soon as she saw his smile, Rey knew that she was on the right track and she found relief in that. "I see..." was all she said before nodding and glancing around.

    Her attention was brought back to him when she couldn't help but notice the scars on his back. They looked old but she knew the injury would have been very painful. It didn't seem appropriate or respectful to ask him where he got them, so she turned away and didn't press the matter.

    Instead she took this time to reflect on everything that had happened so far. It certainly had been a wild ride, from leaving with Balkish and abandoning her Jedi training, to reuniting with her parents, to travelling to the Sith academy and now they were on their way to a brand new planet. There was no telling what would happen from here, and it was both exciting and nerve-wracking.

    "How much longer until we reach Tattooine, Master?" Rey asked as she turned to look at him.

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    Call me intrigued. What would their affiliation be? Friend, foe?

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    We can whenever you like.

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  • Balkish's answer gave her some relief, but she still felt torn about what she wanted to do. As long as she didn't have to choose right away, there was still some time to figure that out.

    Rey was frustrated that she still didn't quite understand what he was telling her, and worried that she might irritate her Master by asking him to clarify. At the same time, she wanted so desperately to understand. Her previous training was still clouding her vision from accepting other truths.

    "Yes, I'm still confused about one thing. Say we're sparring and I end up killing you accidentally, how is that a good thing? I mean...it would show how powerful I've become but that would mean I've killed my Master and that my training can't continue...right?" she asked, hoping that he could see where she was coming from with this. But even as she said this a realization came to her.

    "Or...would that mean my training would be complete?" she added, wondering if she was finally catching on.

  • Her new master's style of teaching was very different in comparison to her old one. Rey squinted slightly and tilted her head as he talked, trying to fully understand and comprehend what he was telling her. Was he really suggesting that hurting him would be a victory? It didn't quite make sense to Rey, but maybe it would in time.

    Upon hearing his next words, Rey glanced away and nodded lightly. "I understand...I'm prepared to do whatever it takes," she said, and she meant it. Although she was still struggling on which side to choose, or to even choose a side at all, but from what Balkish was saying; it almost sounded like she needed to make a choice.

    "Do I have to choose? Otherwise, how will you know what to call me?" Rey asked in a soft voice.

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  • Rey wasn't surprised when her attempt to stop his attacks had backfired. Really she just wanted to try it to see what would happen. She lowered her hand and gasped when she saw that Balkish's lightsaber was just about to hit her, but he had stopped just in time. She let out a sigh of relief before taking a step back.

    Listening to him talk, Rey nodded and became very sheepish. "Yes Master, you're right...I just wanted to see if I could do it. It seemed like a good way to stop opponents from attacking," she said with a modest shrug, trying to explain her reasoning. "Do you have any other feedback for me? How did I do?" she asked, wanting to know how she did but also slightly afraid that she had made mistakes.

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