MY STORY.

born and raised on the world of the zabrak alien race that supported the empire, even as a mere baby, Balkish was strong in the force and at the age of 7, he was discovered by the sith and they took him to Korriban to become sith. Balkish was only a child surrounded by other people who was force sensitive, who saw him as an easy prey, he grew quickly a strong hold of fear in his mind that was close to be the end of his life when he was sent out into one of the old sith tombs on the planet, to recover an old sith holocron where he was met by two other sith acolytes who hated aliens and wanted Balkish out of the way. Balkish suffered severe wounds upon his body and as he was laying on the ground bleeding to death, he heard the words that unlocked the hate that was laying hidden deep inside Balkish. The two acolytes had mocked him for being weak like any other alien, who thought that they had a chance to become sith. this angered Balkish but it wasnt until they told him they where going to visit his tribe on his home planet when they where done on Korriban, that Balkish lost it and jumped up from the ground and jumped over both the acolytes and grabbed his training saber and managed to cut the leg off, of one of the acolytes and the other he shot lightning at out of his finger tips without even knowing he was able to do that. The lightning paralyzed the other acolyte and Balkish jumped in and slashes his weapon across his face and made him blind. With both his enemies crippled he looked down at them and saw how weak they where, despite their claim to be masters of the force, he wanted to kill them but after the way they had mocked him, his tribe and the force, he decided to let the force decide if they where to survive. He grabbed the holocron he was sent to recover and then left the two acolytes alone deeply within the dark tomb. Balkish never saw them again but on his way out, he heard the sound of the crawling beast that lurked in the tomb and the screams of the two acolytes that echoed out through the old tomb. Since then Balkish was no longer the afraid and weeping child he had been, when he was taken away from his home. the emotion of hate had taken its place in his mind and created a deadly and cold sith, when he was fifteen he ended his sith training on Koriban by killing ten acolytes and two sith overseers with only his training sabers, he had been using two training sabers since he was ten since he felt one saber wasnt enough for him. He took the crystals of the overseers lightsabers and quickly after that found all the parts he needed to construct his two lightsabers. The slaughter of the many acolytes and two sith overseers quickly spread. Normally Balkish would have been trialed and executed for violating the rules of Koriban but he was released out into the galaxy under an order that came directly from the dark council. No sith lords wanted him as an apprentice but his rage could still be used as a unleashed weapon if allowed to be so. And so Balkish left Koriban in his new star ship and took out to explore the galaxy. A few decades later the watcher one and watcher two contacted Balkish informing him that the sith emperor had been watching him since he was a child and had now chosen him as his new wrath and so they bestowed the title the emperors wrath to Balkish meaning he served as the emperors right hand not even the dark council had authority to command him or could stop him from doing his missions only the emperor could command him.

APPEARANCE.

Skin color red with a little bit of orange but primary red.
Horns that goes all around his head
his black  paint covering his body and face
about 1 meter and 95 centimeters tall.
age 29 (human years)
Sometimes he grows out his hair but not always.




(Balkishg in his Sith battle armor leading other fellow Sith into battle)

Character Age

29 (in human years)


Character Species

Other


Character Gender

Male


Character Relationship Status

single


Character Appearance

Spiky horns around the head, red/orange Mixed skin color, yellow eyes war tribe face and body paint.


Character History/Story

Born and raised on the world of the zabrak alien race that supported the empire, even as a mere baby, Balkish was strong in the force and at the age of 4, he was discovered by the sith and they took him to Korriban to become sith. Balkish was only a child surrounded by other people who was force sensitive, who saw him as an easy prey, he grew quickly a strong hold of fear in his mind that was close to be the end of his life when he was sent out into one of the old sith tombs on the planet, to recover an old sith holocron where he was met by two other sith acolytes who hated aliens and wanted Balkish out of the way. Balkish suffered severe wounds upon his body and as he was laying on the ground bleeding to death, he heard the words that unlocked the hate that was laying hidden deep inside Balkish. The two acolytes had mocked him for being weak like any other alien, who thought that they had a chance to become sith. this angered Balkish but it wasnt until they told him they where going to visit his tribe on his home planet when they where done on Korriban, that Balkish lost it and jumped up from the ground and jumped over both the acolytes and grabbed his training saber and managed to cut the leg off, of one of the acolytes and the other he shot lightning at out of his finger tips without even knowing he was able to do that. The lightning paralyzed the other acolyte and Balkish jumped in and slashes his weapon across his face and made him blind. With both his enemies crippled he looked down at them and saw how weak they where, despite their claim to be masters of the force, he wanted to kill them but after the way they had mocked him, his tribe and the force, he decided to let the force decide if they where to survive. He grabbed the holocron he was sent to recover and then left the two acolytes alone deeply within the dark tomb. Balkish never saw them again but on his way out, he heard the sound of the crawling beast that lurked in the tomb and the screams of the two acolytes that echoed out through the old tomb. Since then Balkish was no longer the afraid and weeping child he had been, when he was taken away from his home. the emotion of hate had taken its place in his mind and created a deadly and cold sith, when he was fifteen he ended his sith training on Koriban by killing ten acolytes and two sith overseers with only his training sabers, he had been using two training sabers since he was ten since he felt one saber wasnt enough for him. He took the crystals of the overseers lightsabers and quickly after that found all the parts he needed to construct his two lightsabers. The slaughter of the many acolytes and two sith overseers quickly spread. Normally Balkish would have been trialed and executed for violating the rules of Koriban but he was released out into the galaxy under an order that came directly from the dark council. No sith lords wanted him as an apprentice but his rage could still be used as a unleashed weapon if allowed to be so. And so Balkish left Koriban in his new star ship and took out to explore the galaxy. A few decades later the watcher one and watcher two contacted Balkish informing him that the sith emperor had been watching him since he was a child and had now chosen him as his new wrath and so they bestowed the title the emperors wrath to Balkish meaning he served as the emperors right hand not even the dark council had authority to command him or could stop him from doing his missions only the emperor could command him.


Character Inventory

a star ship two lightsabers but he has collected several lightsabers that he has taken from fallen sith and jedi`s he has killed his dark sith robes with a hood that can hide him in dark places as well as hide his face. Balkish is trained in the most unpredictable and most aggressive form of lightsaber combat the Juyo also called vaapad and this form only became more aggressive and unpredictable because of Balkish's fondness of using two lightsabers at once, though when he is only using one lightsaber he would often use the soresu form which he uses as an element of surprise against his opponent especially when facing other Sith or Jedi, he often start the battle with just one lightsaber and is on the defense line as is the way of the soresu form and then hiding his other lightsaber, and then when they least expect it he would draw his second lightsaber with the force and start to unleash his fury and his rage with quick and devastating aggressive attacks, often surprising his fellow sith and especially jedi when faced with the fear and the rage he fought with and put into the minds of his enemies.


Character Abilites

extensive mastery of the force, master of lightsaber combat, and extremely strong physical body that also can endure allot


Writer's Writing Style (OOC)

No-Preference


Writer's Favored Genres (OOC)

Fantasy, Violence, Rated R, 18+, Action, Adult


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  • [ Thank you! My Sunday has only just started actually but thank you anyways haha same to you ]

  • (Alrighty then I set to working on it :) )

  • (I don't mind starting b ut I always say if you want to start go right ahead.)

  • (Ooo that is very interesting!  Yes that can defiantly work. It sounds like we have a plan.)

  • (That actually sounds interesting, Both sound good and depending which time we uses be it before her captive by her brother or during. Whichever but on the run she has a more chance of running into Balkish, but I am currious on how he could keep himself looking youthful, it's pretty interesting)

  • (Awesome and yes she she.)

  • [ Hi there! It's nice to hear from you. I'm sorry to hear that you've had a rough time lately. As soon as one of my threads opens up you will be the first person I tell :) Thanks for checking in! ]

  • [ Hello friend! Absolutely no worries. Life comes first after all! Do what you need to do and take care. I'll be here when you're ready :) ]

  • She was overjoyed when he accepted her offer, and couldn't help but smile brightly as he spoke. Yes, a grey Jedi...or a grey Sith...either way, she liked the idea of being at the center between the two extremes, between light and dark, black and white, good and evil.

    "Yes, I'll be right there!" Rey said before quickly turning away. She took a moment to gather her things in a backpack, as well as say goodbye to her parents. It nearly broke her heart to leave them again, but she knew where they were, and that they were safe, that was good enough for now. Besides, she had a feeling that they would meet again soon.

    "Goodbye, I love you!" Rey said with a tear and a smile as she waved to her parents and joined Balkish in the elevator. Breathing in and out, the realization of what she was about to do was starting to sink in.

  • Rey nodded her head as he spoke, and deemed that he was probably right. "Alright," she said before turning away. She was about to go back to her parents and see what they had to say, but the hologram that came up grabbed her attention and she looked over at it.

    Rey stood there silently as she listened to the servant on the other end explain the situation. She didn't fully understand everything, but what she heard was enough to inspire a decision to be made in her mind. Like a candle lighting in the darkness, she suddenly knew what she had to do and what path she was going to take.

    After the servant was finished talking, Rey immediately spoke and took a step towards Balkish. "I will go with you!" she said very suddenly. "I will help you face Darth Jadus, as your apprentice...you have given me my life back, and shown me the truth of the Jedi ways. I don't want to be a Sith...but I refuse to follow the Jedi path any longer," she paused, and looked down at her palm which was clenched in a tight fist.

    "You have given me so much...and I want to repay you by becoming your ally."

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"*Balkish grins and laughs a bit at Rey's answer, it seemed that she either thought this was a trick question or that he had some kind of plan for whatever answer she would give him* There is no answer that i would prefer, there is no right or wrong…"
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Apr 15
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